Wow, this is a really good poem! Even though it doesn't rhyme, I think the poem still flows very smoothly and each topic that's touched upon is well written and has lots of meaning behind it. There's just one thing I don't understand though...the title. I'm probably being a massive idiot right now, and I'm probably offending you or pissing you off, but I don't understand why the poem is name "Whales". Other than that, the piece is great. I think there are a few mistakes like capitalizing the "i" in the final stanza and maybe put some "" around don't you haunt me, but other than that, this is a great poem.
I recommend doing your next poem on rowing boats....Don't actually though,
RowMahBoat
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