Thanks for sharing this poem. The poem has a nice smooth flow to it that makes reading it a pleasant experience. The rhythm and short lines go well with the emotions being expressed.
I agree, not easy to see someone who has tricked us via hypocrisy and then dumped us thriving, that's for sure. It is as if the person is being rewarded for doing us in. As if insult is added to injury. What we really are hoping for is some evidence that the person who hurt us is somehow paying for what he or she or he did. Then we could write a letter of triumph instead. A letter that we then would want the person to read.
suggestion:
This is a letter
I hope you'll never read
I think that the above should be one line not two.
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