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Today (not quite a poem)

by Sophie


Today was a day of life change, I guess

The 7th of the 2nd month '06.

18-day decomposing closest companion.

Teeth baring, stench overwhelming...

Closure, they call it.

Today a shocking truth was revealed.

An unnatached friend's secret.

Fourteen year old's sweet innocence lost--

Followed by the fact she told someone else --

-- Both before me

For me at fifteen, with passions for music and poisons,

It is a big step to bury a rotted soulmate

And hard to understand if a friend is so stupid.


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Thu Feb 09, 2006 11:15 pm
xanthan gum wrote a review...



i just wanted to say that i say this on the home page and i just HAD to read it..and open reading it...it reflected exactly what's going on in my life right now. this is EXACTLY what happened to me. wow. i just was stunned by that alone. it was well written, too, and i loved the ending. the ending touched me and...i almost considered another plan of action in my life.





I will not condemn you for what you did yesterday, if you do it right today.
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