Today was a day of life change, I guess
The 7th of the 2nd month '06.
18-day decomposing closest companion.
Teeth baring, stench overwhelming...
Closure, they call it.
Today a shocking truth was revealed.
An unnatached friend's secret.
Fourteen year old's sweet innocence lost--
Followed by the fact she told someone else --
-- Both before me
For me at fifteen, with passions for music and poisons,
It is a big step to bury a rotted soulmate
And hard to understand if a friend is so stupid.
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Powerful.
i just wanted to say that i say this on the home page and i just HAD to read it..and open reading it...it reflected exactly what's going on in my life right now. this is EXACTLY what happened to me. wow. i just was stunned by that alone. it was well written, too, and i loved the ending. the ending touched me and...i almost considered another plan of action in my life.