Hi @Sumgg I am here to do a review on your poem.
What I like most about it
I really feel like this, I feel like this could be a son.
what lines are the best
I really like how you started this of so much to one line, I like the the sound of yellow roses.The yellow roses harvested
Well that's some good description here, this line just gives me so much i dear's.In couples by the roadThis just sounds really sweat I feel, I love this line and the first, they just go so well to gather.Oh I love this, some grate imagery here,And the speckled deer stand by the pondAnd the slapping of their tongues to their lips
Description
I feel like your description it is really good I like how you describe stuff, also I am getting really good images in my head right now, every line is some thing new I feel.
So this is all that I can say about this, So keep up the real good poem writing here I hope to read more of your stuff.
@EagleFly out to Seek and Kill
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