Published June 11, 2011
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Hello there.
I don't have any nitpicks for you so I'm just going to jump right to the get-go.
I loved this piece. It was interesting because, even though they both died, they still loved each other, and Matt forgave her for not saying good bye and being selfish as he put it. I don't think that i could have written anything near as emotionally wrecking as this. And even though they both died, Skylar played a key role, seeing as they both moved on. i think she was the key to him moving and vice versa.
This was sweet, and totally loveable.
I've got to say. I've dealt with alot of death recently, and sorrowful things, but this just blows my mind. It's great, and peaceful to think that people do move on like this. I hope they do anyways.
Overall, a truly wonderful piece. You tugged alot of emotions out of this: anger, jealousy, happiness, sorrow, pain, depression, and finally peace. To be a writer is to know how to write like THIS.
Let me know when you post more.
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--Ash
I find this very good.
I liked the description and vocabulary and how everything was structured into place.
Bullet For My Valentine is a good band and you made a good choice on writing about one of their songs.
I find this very remarkable and worth reading.