Published December 30, 2007
I'm Sorry
I know this
I apologize
for things that I did
just let me
explain that I still love you.
Chorus
Just please
don't let us go
I know that we been
working on this
for a long time
just listen to me
just listen to your heart
and you will know
that you don't
want to let us go.
Now its your turn
to say what you need to say
come on you can say it to my face
I know you don't want to
But you got to do it anyway
Bridge
At first I thought
this wouldn't work out
I thought us wouldn't be ok
But when i got to know you
Everything began to fall is place.
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tres coolios =]
never knew there was a lyric forum =P
I shall be posting
i love the way you got so much emotion into such a piece
i can really relate to it, ive been trough that kind of situation and you really summed it up
have you thought of any tune of melody, or is it just the lyrics?
whatever it is, its great, i love it ^.^
Eva XxXxX
I really love this! It's beautiful. It flows really well, and i like how you convey your emotions so clearly and that there's still something behind it. It's a little short, but that isn't a problem because it carries so much emotion.
But i must say thast the only part i don't like is "come on you can say it to my face" , it doesn't really fit in.
Keep writing, and if you ever need anything just pm me!
Nilou
This was extremely good! It was a little short, but I loved it! XD Keep writing.
Jamie
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!! It's got so much emotion behind it. You didn't force anything it flows together nicely. I have nothing more to say than.... WOW
As always
-Max