Marius was easy to spot. Leilan’s friend was lurking near the desserts, inhaling a plate of tiramisu as if he were afraid someone would take it away from him. His eyes were trained on an empty platter laying out on the buffet, and Leilan realized he was waiting for another tray of tiramisu to be brought out. So he’d been having a good party so far, then.
“Thought I’d find you here,” Leilan said, walking up beside him with no introduction. “You look like you’ve been busy.”
Marius’s eyes lit up when he turned to see him, and he quickly swallowed the bite he was in the middle of. “I have eaten… an undisclosed amount of this stuff.” He tapped the edge of the plate with his spoon. “It’s dangerously addictive.”
“Should I stay away from it, then?” Leilan asked.
“Yes,” Marius said without missing a beat. “But not for that reason. You should leave it all for me.”
Leilan grinned, holding out an arm. Marius understood the signal and went for the side hug.
“It’s been too long,” Leilan said.
“It’s been one week,” Marius answered, but there was amused warmth in his tone as he pulled away.
“Exactly.”
Marius let out a laugh, but he visibly sobered a little as concern flashed in his eyes. “Everything alright with you guys?”
It was a question Leilan expected, but one he wasn’t sure how to answer. The situation had only gotten worse since he’d called Marius, and he knew what Marius had already heard was alarming enough. What could he say, in this crowded room, that was honest and wouldn’t leave his friend even more anxious?
“We’re taking action,” Leilan decided to say. “And we’re doing our best.”
Marius opened his mouth to speak, his concerned expression deepening, but Kasumi materialized out of the crowd at his side and startled them both.
“How’s the desserts?” she asked loudly.
Marius pressed a hand to his chest. “You’ll give me a heart attack, if the sugar doesn’t beat you to it.”
“Yep, nice to see you too.” Kasumi was eyeing Marius’s plate eagerly, and Leilan had the feeling she might snatch it right out of his hands if she wasn’t distracted away from it, so he spoke up again.
“Where have you been?” he asked.
Kasumi shrugged. “Oh, you know. Wandering the room. Looking glamorous. Walking away quickly from anyone who looks like they want to give me a piece of their mind.”
“Just don’t be too suspicious,” Leilan reminded her.
“Like I ever have been,” Kasumi replied, before glancing around at the room through squinted eyes in a way that Leilan felt undermined her point.
Marius huffed. “I mean, there’s plenty of actually weird, questionable things happening here,” he said. “I don’t think anyone will worry too much about you.”
Leilan’s gaze flicked to him. “Like what?” he asked, hearing some of his trepidation enter his tone.
“Like, Shane beelined to the courtyard garden and back really quickly a bit ago, which was odd, although I’m sure he had some valid reason for it,” Marius said. Leilan raised his eyebrows in confusion, because that wasn’t part of the plan anywhere. “But also, there was—”
“We had a scheduled meeting time,” a harsh voice cut in. “One you really can’t afford to miss by engaging in frivolous small talk.”
Saints. Leilan wanted to groan upon recognizing who was speaking.
Casper Bridger’s scowling face appeared in his vision as the businessman shoved his way into the conversation, nearly stepping on Kasumi’s foot to do so, which earned him a barely concealed death glare. Marius visibly tensed, setting his spoon back onto his plate. Leilan pressed his lips together in an attempt to hide his frustration: partly because he wanted to hear what the other suspicious thing would’ve been, partly because this was a conversation he knew he would hate.
“Mr. Bridger,” Marius said, with forced politeness. “I’m sorry—”
“As you should be,” Casper said. His eyes flicked between Kasumi and Leilan, as if just noticing them, and his expression soured further. “You may leave us.”
There was only one person on the planet with the audacity to talk to an Heir that way, and Leilan couldn’t fathom where he’d gotten it from.
“Actually,” Leilan said, slapping a smile on his face. “I don’t believe there’s anything you can say to Marius that you can’t say to us. We’re informed, after all.”
“You’re not in business,” Casper said dismissively.
“Yes,” Leilan agreed. “We’re several steps above that.”
He didn’t really like to pull rank, but from the relief that filled Marius’s face, he decided it was worth it. Just this one time.
Casper glanced at Kasumi, who had a cheerfully bright smile lighting her face at the idea of putting him back in his place. His expression turned irritated but resigned.
“Fine,” he snapped, before turning his glare back to Marius. “Where’s my money?”
“I don’t have it,” Marius said, with the wearied patience of someone who had explained this many times already. “You’ve invested it. The money has gone into the project. The contract you signed states that there cannot be a refund on your investment, and you’ll see your profit once the product is out in the world.”
“I invested in a satellite, not a badly hatched plot to commit insurance fraud,” Casper said sharply.
Marius sighed. “Again, I didn’t steal the battery.”
“Tell that to your lawyers, not me,” Casper retorted.
Marius pressed his lips together as if he were biting something back, but he stood taller. “Regardless, this has only delayed the launch, not canceled the project. The battery was the only prototype of a final design, but our engineers are already hard at work on rebuilding it.”
“And this will take…?” Casper pressed.
“Weeks,” Marius said.
To Leilan, that was a surprisingly short amount of time, but it didn’t seem to impress Casper, because the businessman only sneered. “Yeah, count me out.”
“That is not how it works,” Marius said tiredly.
“So how long until you’re planning to declare bankruptcy, Casper?” Kasumi asked, the innocent curiosity in her voice catching Leilan off guard.
All three of them turned her way. Leilan and Marius looked at her with expectant confusion, while Casper’s expression was indignant.
“I beg your pardon?” Casper asked with fake pleasantness.
“Just noticing you seem a little short on time,” Kasumi remarked. “Which is funny, because if you’re looking for a quick return on your investment, you don’t invest in a space mission that takes years to finish. You must’ve considered it worth the risk a while ago. Have you lost some money in the meantime?”
It was, admittedly, hard for Leilan not to laugh at the outrage that overtook Casper’s face.
“I’m not going bankrupt,” Casper snapped.
“My bad,” Kasumi said, holding up her hands. “I shouldn’t have presumed anything so fast. I suppose the possibility of being in someone’s debt with payday coming around is still out there.”
Marius barked a loud, extremely short-lived laugh that ended the moment Casper’s livid glare landed on him. Leilan took a sudden interest in a crystal chandelier overhead so he could keep the smile tugging at his lips under control.
Casper shook his head in disgust. “My family’s got more money than your House’s yearly budget.”
“Wait, actually?” Kasumi asked thoughtfully. “Okay. That kind of sounds like a problem. Maybe that shouldn’t be the case.”
Leilan made a mental note that would likely remain tucked away in his brain for a while until this was all over: the House of Honor might stop supporting tax cuts for the wealthy soon enough.
Casper’s eye twitched. Leilan knew he had something to say, but he must’ve been unwilling to risk provoking Kasumi’s spite, because he looked away from her and back to Marius.
“This is not over,” he seethed. “There’s a loophole to be found in that contract.”
Marius shrugged. “Tell that to your lawyers, not me.”
Leilan couldn’t help but grin as Casper swore angrily under his breath and stormed out of the conversation. Kasumi pumped her fist in quiet celebration.
“Thanks for staying,” Marius said with relief.
“Anytime,” Kasumi said breezily.
“Just— Saints, he’s the actual worst,” Marius groaned quietly. “I don’t know how his family tolerates him. There was that rumor that he got his brother disowned— everyone has their own claims for why it happened, but all of them boil down to jealousy…”
Marius went on, but his words were drowned out in Leilan’s head as the gravity of the situation came back to him. They couldn’t waste time on gossip, as much as he wanted to spend the night doing nothing but talking with his friend. They were here to find Sparrow.
“Marius— sorry to interrupt,” Leilan cut in. “But you were saying something questionable was happening, before Casper came along. What was it?”
“Hmm? Oh, right.” Marius tapped his spoon against his plate with a thoughtful look. “A girl in a hospital gown.”
“What?”
“Right?” Marius said in agreement. “It’s a strictly enforced dress code event.”
“A girl? How old was she?” Kasumi asked in disbelief.
“Oh, I don’t know. Ten, eleven— definitely in her preteens. Looked like she’d been dragged right out of a hospital bed,” Marius said. With each word, he was slowing down, as if realizing this was more odd than he’d first thought. “She was accompanied by some young woman leading her around— come to think of it, she wasn’t in formal attire either…”
There was a heavy pause as Leilan and Kasumi both stared at Marius.
“…I’m getting the feeling that I probably should’ve reported this to someone long ago,” Marius said weakly.
He probably should have. But there was no time for that now.
“What did the young woman look like?” Leilan pressed.
“Very tall, and pale as a sheet,” Marius said. “She had dark braided hair, and was wearing mostly black. She had a snakeskin belt, too. I thought she might be with the House of Loyalty until I noticed her clothing was more… tactical than fancy.”
The description meant nothing to Leilan, but Kasumi suddenly reached over and seized his wrist as well as Marius’s. Leilan winced at the same time that Marius mouthed an Ouch. Kasumi’s nails were too long for that.
“I know her,” Kasumi blurted. “Her name’s Pia. She’s one of Sparrow’s—we took her magic supply in the Arcade, and she was there to steal the First Spell from the safe.”
It all clicked in Leilan’s head. He’d barely seen the robbers before that strange smoke bomb had gone off in the hotel lobby, but with the connection made for him, he thought he remembered someone like her standing in front of the safe with a spell in hand.
“I’m guessing that’s… not good,” Marius said carefully.
“Nope,” Kasumi said. “Where did she go?”
Marius turned, pointing at the opposite wall of the room. “Up the staircase on the other side. She led the girl along with her. But it’s been a while, and I don’t know if I missed her leaving.”
“Got it. We’re going that way, then.” Kasumi let go of Marius, pulling Leilan that way.
Leilan didn’t move just yet, though, instead meeting Marius’s eyes. His friend’s expression was slowly filling with more and more alarm and fear. Heart sinking, he placed a hand on his shoulder.
“Can you lay low down here?” he asked quietly. “We’re going to take care of this.”
“Yes, but—” Marius faltered. “Can’t you leave this to someone else?”
Leilan wished he could. But he shook his head.
“We’re the only ones who know what we’re up against,” he said.
Marius pressed his lips together, visibly upset. There was a familiar stubbornness shining in his eyes, one Leilan didn’t see too often, but he knew its power. “But—” he protested.
Kasumi’s nails were tightening insistently against his wrist. He sensed her panic through it.
“Stay here,” Leilan said, pleading rather than ordering. Then Kasumi was dragging him behind her, and he had no choice but to follow along.
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I'm so far behiiiiind
I'm really liking Marius as a character. His relationship with Leilan is appropriately brotherly and the light teasing but with an undercoat of caring comes off really clearly. I remember being a bit suspicious of him when they were all on the plane earlier on (that was him, right?) but it seems like that might have been unfounded suspicion. I like the levity he's bringing in an almost comic foil type fashion.
Good grief, is he everywhere? I'm interested to see the actual interaction between him and Cyrin because we only saw a brief snippet of it in the previous chapter. I'm wondering if there are any traits they share because right now they seem pretty different.
This is very perceptive of her!
But nobody else noticed? Marius is right, this is a formal dress code so these two people would have looked very out of place to everyone. Is it really that likely that nobody else has commented on it, or stopped them to figure out who they are?
Hmm, something tells me he isn't going to stay here at all.
I'm assuming the girl in the hospital is the one Cyrin was calling at the start of all this (I want to say Autumn, but may have made that up?). I'm glad if so that she's turning into a more real character, but I can't help but feel they're going to use her to manipulate Cyrin into doing something bad TM. I better keep reading!
Thanks Icy! Looking at my notifs like wow, you've been busy today and I am so glad to see it XD
When was the last time a character ever listened to thisHey Silver!
Stopping by where I left off! In order to check off another review from the 12 Days of Reviewing challenge, I need to use the words "snowfall" and "gingerbread" in this review. And though I used them right there I'm not getting off that easy! Let's see how seamlessly I can incorporate them into critiquing The Last Spell, shall we?
LOL. I relate to Marius.
This interaction is sooo good! Like I said in an earlier chapter, I feel so much less lost than I normally would jumping into a random chapter this far in. Taking the highlighted quote as an example, in this instance I don't feel confused because the history between these two characters is established seamlessly and their characterizations are done so well. It's like I'm a random guest at this party eavesdropping on their conversation, gleaning their personalities and relationship from only a few sentences.
Maybe this is just me, but it feels unnatural to hear the uncertainty in your own voice as you're speaking. Should be an easy fix - try: "he asked, some of his trepidation entering his tone."
Some more slightly awkward wording. Try: "Businessman Casper Bridger, face scowling, shoved his way into the conversation and nearly crushed Kasumi's foot as he did so..."
Hah! For being kinda terrible at not looking suspicious earlier in the chapter, she's got some serious spunk and clearly isn't half bad at acting!
This struggle to mentally multitask in a social situation is a nice touch. Reminds me of when I was so focused on establishing the structural integrity of my gingerbread house foundation that I missed half of my friend's breakup story!
Again, ugh I just really admire your understanding of how human minds work and your skill for translating that onto the page!
Just so you know, that's the third time you've used that phrase in this chapter. Not a big deal since it's not a particularly unique or noticeable phrase, but I thought you should know!
Once again, I enjoyed this a lot! Marius is fantastic - loyal, smart, goofy. I hope to see more of him! Also, wow, so much has happened at this party so far, and I probably missed a lot of it still. I appreciate this kind of pacing where the setting hasn't changed but the plot is rich with different character interactions and perspectives. Great job, Silv!
Lastly, uh... enjoy the snowfall if you experience such weather where you live??
Wolfi
Such a pleasure to have you back Wolfi, thanks so much! I'm so glad you're still enjoying things and came back for more. Excellent incorporation of winter words-- probably no snowfall for me, but eh, one can hope!
Hey there! Plume here, with a review!
Ooh, you're adding more to the mix here. Is the girl in a hospital gown the one who Cyrin cares about? I'm assuming so; I feel like we haven't heard about her in a while. I don't think we've found out her significance besides what she means to Cyrin. I wonder if she's tied at all to his pseudo-immortality.
That was also interesting to learn about Casper's money troubles. I feel like we've been seeing a lot of him in these past few sections; it makes me feel like he might have more bearing on the main plot. It seems like a lot of this all hinges on or around Cyrin. I just hope they'll make it out alive.
I'm glad too that Marius seems to be helpful still; I remember reading it a while back and thinking that he had the potential to be one to betray them, and I'm glad that it seems like he's not going to do that. He added some much needed levity (and some completely accurate tiramisu propaganda) that would have been missing from this section otherwise.
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I love the way you characterize Casper. I actually want to slap him so bad. Also, it was this part that I realized I've just been picturing Casper as a taller, angrier Cyrin.
Top tier Kasumi take. Not that the houses are much better, but they'd be a slight improvement than rich jerks like Casper.
I am always a sucker for turning an antagonist's line back on them. This was no exception.
Overall: great work! We're getting closer to that ever-approaching confrontation, and I for one cannot wait to see what it brings! Until next time!
Ayyyy welcome back Plume and thanks again!!
Cyrin: we are nothing alike >:(