Published December 1, 2007
Anticipation.
Great dark swells of scorn and hate
I wait for fury.
Wasnt exactly sure which catagory a haiku would fit under but hey give me a break, after all I am only a newb 
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That was awesome!
Usually I dislike Haiku's, but that was totally cool. I loved the way you described the swells/clouds. Also, the part about waiting for fury was pwnful--like waiting for lashing rain, right?
Anyways, great job!
Keep writing,
-Ayra
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