As our journey continues within the magical realm of Magestorrow's poetry, we have arrived at this quite interesting poem. The background information combined with the tight stanzas we have here in this poem, gives a rather distinct idea of what kind of place a campground could possibly be in people's wildest dreams.
Let's roll on into the review then. This gives a fun fantastical feel to what otherwise might be felt as mundane to people who aren't into the whole "visit the outdoors and trees and stuff" so I'm already intrigued by the first few lines. I like how there's a sense of consistency, even with the various capitalized letters and words thrown throughout the poem. This definitely is giving me Neil Gaiman vibes, (specifically Stardust because that's the only book I've read of his) and I one hundred percent am here for it!
The timeline is a little murky for the reader primarily I think in the transition between the travelers asking to stay the night and the Mist arriving. The sole reason for this mostly comes from the fact that the reader is trying to figure out who they're reading this poem from - what view, what person, what people, or even nothing specific at all could be reciting this idea. This reads almost like a legend, or a fairy tale spoken to youngsters, and while I like that, I'm not sure if that was the intended method of conveying (if those words make any sense.) Really, what I mean is that while I like the adjoined feel from the scene, such as being told this by a slightly British voice overview a beautiful forest, I like there to be some kind of connection to the reader.
Overall, though, I think an interesting take on this poem would be to have a specific little testimony of one of these outside travelers, even for a few lines, and being able to say what they truly see. That could work well with the introduction of the Mist, saying something like "little did they know what the Mist does" as I think that flows better with both parts of the poem. I think this poem was a lot of fun to read, and I hope this was helpful!
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