The Contract 2- (Brief beginning)

I must say that I honestly know who Ryan is.
He is a good friend of mine.
I have also read alot of his sequel 'The Contract 2' and seeing I haven't seen you in a while Ryan, I'd like to tell you here and now that it would be a good idea to post more of your story, even if it gets changed by your editior.
That is all.

Yeah, I gotta say I love this stuff.
The Contract is my favourite book so far on YWS so please post more soon.
Thanks.

Ryan wrote:‘Who the hell are you?’, he choked.
I grabbed a cushion as the bullet went though the careful stitching and into the man’s chest.
‘Happy Birthday’, I said.
I walked out of the house and drove off in my car, the information on all five targets in the back-seat.

Bonni Bee must be a pretty smart girl!
She kinda spelt it all out well.
I hope that the beginning would clear up once I read the first book.
Why are the robbers going in to the house?
I thought that the assassin character is really well thought up and I definitely don't want to bump into him anytime soon!

Cool!

the start had me a bit confused, but it got better and better as it went along.

It sounds like it's going to be great!

keep up the good work

Holy Baloney!

Are you really fifteen?
I wasn't expecting something quite like that. You didn't copy or anything?
Amazing!
I also thought this one is a major candidate for a motion picture and I think you should really get this around.
It sounds like a great story so far and I think it's great how the story is coming from the assassin. Is that so it's easier to show that he wont show his name?
There were a few grammar errors but their alot easier to fix than a storyline!
Brilliant job Ryan.
I can't wait to here more!