Stirly, I'm so sorry. I probably should have thought of that, and I'm thoroughly embarrassed that I didn't. I hope I didn't offend you in any way.
Also, If you read the earlier chapters, you would have caught on to the chapter names being the ages. I try to shove it in ever chapter, but sometimes it gets difficult. If you all still feel that the chapter titles aren't enough when I don't throw it in, please tell me so I can fix it.
Also, if anybody has read this and found it a little confusing whether I'm reffering to Mrs. Lithon or Evie's biological mother, speak up. I try not to use the name Mrs. Lithon as often as I might because it kinda kills the bond they've gotten over the years. I try and stay away from saying biological as well because it's not like she was taken away at birth. She had seven years with her real mother and they weren't really bad until a year or two before Evie ended up in the orphanage. I really shouldn't have to be saying any of this, but it just feels better for me to say that right now. XD I hate when people get confused with me because it happens more often then not.
Thanks for both of your crits. I'll be sure to remember your suggestions when I write the next chapter.
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