First of all.
What?
I didn't really like this poem.
You neede to work on it a little more.
I bark at thee to write again,
only then can the world see your sound.
Is he a dog or something?
Make it something like pleed, or beg.
Bark is a bit, weird.
Just needs a bit of work that's all.
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