Published May 13, 2010
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The voices that curl in your head calling you a bitch/fat/hopeless are relentless.
Cut and binge because you don’t want to hear or feel it. Cut and binge because its temporary anaesthetic and it works until you start to rot from the inside out.
Cutcutcut until you can’t feel the hand that’s roped to the razorblade.
Cut and binge because it’s the only thing you can think of to make yourself feel better, even though you know it’s slowly killing you.
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As I mentioned in 03, I realise you may be posting these as you write them, but really, slot them together and organise them a bit more. Even if you have to write half a novel before you start posting, it will work much better than posting tiny scraps.
This little piece, I suppose would make much more sense if put into a larger chapter. On its own it just seems a little psychotic :p