A Morning Poem of Peace

by PsyLynx

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Published July 17, 2005

A Morning Poem of Peace

7-16-05

The dawn reappears
the light waves retain their dignity,
as they lasertocrystal dance about us,
The warmth is felt again,
The dew that is fallen rises,
sings itself into the air...
Daytime is appeared.

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Rei
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Rei commented Comment · Jul 19, 2005

What she said.

And as for the last line, that depends. Sometimes I see in books where they use older dialects of English they'll use the "to be" verbs differently from the way we do.

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Chevy
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Chevy commented Comment · Jul 19, 2005

Wow! That was amazing. I like the kind of formal sense it had to it. The only thing is the last line. Shouldn't it have been "Daytime has appeared?"



What really knocks me out is a book that, when you're all done reading it, you wish the author that wrote it was a terrific friend of yours and you could call him up on the phone whenever you felt like it. That doesn't happen much, though.
— J.D. Salinger, The Catcher in the Rye