Published October 29, 2005
I am a fat fish
Swimming in the sea
If you see an obese blob of scales
You will know that it's me
I am a fat fish
So much plumper than the rest
The fishermen all try to catch me
Because I taste the best
I am a fat fish
On a fat plate
I tried to swim away
But it was too late
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HAH
It's such a stupid username... I refuse to call you by it...
Aha! You catually called me a name other than twinkling person.
Lol no! I was just doing it for Twinkle cause she thought my martyr poem was sad
Lol, so cute!
Its silly, and if thats what you were hoping for, right on! If, however, you were to trying to tell a sad story rich with unfortunate images and metephores...
lol, just kiddin!
That's a load!
And stop laughing at the poor fat fish! He has diet problems I'll have you know...
lol, that is funny!!!
very cute, and yes, that 'obese blob of scales' is hilarious!!! 
good job
Fish aren't martyrs though are they? Fish are just FAT!
teehee - glad you like it
LOL very funny!
I loved the obese blob of scales line, that made me laugh out loud.
Much different than your Martyr poem. Very much different.