Small Horrors
the field mouse runs
to seek shelter from the storm,
it trembles in the great wind.
it finds many crumbs
in a ransacked barn full of corn,
where many have sinned.
waves of thunder
shatter the silence,
like a crumbling house.
a cat in a blunder
makes an alliance,
with the quiet mouse.
beside the steadfast stallion
nestled in the straw,
the little mouse lay.
outside pushes on a galleon
the wave gnash and claw,
like the rush on D-day.
this is still in progress haha I didn't spend much time on it yet It just flew out so Yah im fixing it
Three lines... barely any rhythm... barely any rhyme...
Or forced rhyme....
Alright, there was some rhythm until this point:
"a cat in a blunder
makes an alliance,
with the mouse."
The last line in the others were longer said... this was short...
It was weird.... not something I'd consider... re-reading until it's thouroughly butchered up 
waves of thunder
shatter the silence,
like a million louse.
outside pushes on a galleon
and the seagulls caw,
all hope for a calm day.
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