**My Thoughts**
Hey @PeindreLeCiel - I love this prompt! I’m going to try to review it as best I can, so bare with me please!
**Originality**
Now, I usually don’t do this category, but it’s a prompt, so… I did a quick Google search of your prompt and I could not find it anywhere. I did see a few prompts out of the many time travel prompts that did look very similar, but not enough to be the same thing. For instance:
You, a time traveler, got stuck in time and had to build a way to go back to 2050… but on the way you accidentally introduced Shakespeare to 21st century slang.“For never was a story more of woe, O bard Alexa, play us despacito.” -Shakespeare
See, totally not the same thing. So I trust that you wrote this! Correct me if I’m wrong!
**Storyline**
Holy cr*p I could write something out of this. Maybe not something good, but something! I like the idea of waiting, she falls in love, and is torn between the two eras when more time travellers come to save her. Oh I would read the heck out of that.
**Better Ways To Post**
I do like how you posted this as a work (so I get points from reviewing hehe), but it is a waste of 200 points. Instead, as @whatchamacallit said, it may be better to post it in the Writer’s Corner or the Writing Tips section in the forums. I haven’t posted much there, maybe a few things, but I do recommend it if you don’t want to waste points on such a short thing.
**Quick Review**
I love it! Good prompt, could make a good story, but there are better places in the forum to post this!
Keep on writing and thinking of these prompts, and have a fantastic day!
Points: 1992
Reviews: 142
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