Published July 25, 2008
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Where it says, '“Um, Chris Hancock, I attend uh, Jackson High in Minnesota.” Said a mop haired boy', the S in the word 'said' shouldn't be capitalised. This is the same with George Pallazolo.
Apart from that, this was really enjoyable. I loved the way the characters were described and the debating concept is unusual and engaging. It's very advanced and challenging but it's also funny. It also makes me interested to see how the story progresses.