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Sun Dec 02, 2018 10:33 pm
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alliyah wrote a review...

I threw this in Google Translate, in order to better review it. Welcome to YWS, I hope your time on this site was or is enjoyable.

Now on to the review!

First, I'm going to interpret this as an advertisement piece of work. I would say, adding graphics - like a picture of a essay or a penguin or something would make it a bit more appealing to the eye. That's something that always is beneficial I believe for advertisements, as long as the image is appropriate and relevant to the product.

Lastly, I think the blend of Chinese and English didn't quite work here - for me, as a native English speaker with no knowledge of Chinese (except what I can gain through Google Translate) the piece appeared slightly sloppy to have both blended together in this way. I think that it would be more successful if a full English translation version was included, however I know that translations can be a bit tricky to do as well.

Also I think there was over-use of the exclamation mark, which is often thought of as less than professional in advertisements, unless it's a product that needs a lot of emotional appeal to succeed.

That's all I had for this review. Happy Review Day!


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Fri Nov 30, 2018 8:55 am
Dossereana wrote a review...

Hi there @Onlyessay, may I ask you how I can read this for it is chines not English sorry about this it is very hard to understand what you have written. then if I can understand it then I mite be a bill to do a real review on it.

were I can not read
美国留学生需要面对接二连三的, 了解留学生需求,提供不同类型的, 代写服务。专业作家熟悉英文, 格式、格式,确保提供优质的论文代写服务,让你再也不用担心学术难题 there that is all that I can not read. it is not to much I think.
also if your not very good at your English then that is okay and I understand. I hop that you keep writing. So that is all that I can say about this.

@EagleFly out to seek and kill

manilla says...

Just pointing out something small, but you shouldn't assume someone's language skills just because they do not post in it.

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