THIS POEM WAS INSPIRED BY THE SONG umiyuri kaiteitan, WHICH YOU CAN LISTEN TO HERE:
Tale of the Deep Sea Lily
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My handwriting sucks. also I did not write the kanji because they would be illegible
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ENGLISH it translates terribly
Don't turn away
dear child,
don't tell me it's bad
I don't want to hear it
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You see,
we're all alone down here
all alone
down here
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You see
the floating lights?
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Don't turn away
dear child,
don't tell me it's bad
I don't want to hear it
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You see,
I hate the life
I'm forced to live
alone with you
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Please help me
as I send out an
SOS
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I'm drowning here
stuck with you
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Don't turn away
dear child,
don't tell me it's bad
I don't want to hear it
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It's nothing.
Hey, I know it's a bit of a hassle once you have already written the kanji/hiragana, but it would be great if you could also post the romaji by editing this comment. That way, I can review it (I'm sorry, I am just a weeb who listens to a lot of J-pop and sparsely writes haiku and tanka)