Published July 5, 2005
JUST FOR U
You are my best friend
I know you will be there till the end
I tell you stuff all the time
Every now and then I may seem like a mime
We've known each other since we were eight
Its been so long I don't even remember the date
You are there through thick and thin
Even when I feel like giving in
Listening to me whine and complain
i must sound so very lame
We laugh until we cry
Sometimes we don't even know why
You are so clever
And i will love you forever
I know you will be there till the end
You are my best friend
By Nicola Bruce
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it's a cool idea, and the sentiment is there, but it seems awful basic. the rhymes are a little forced, and i think you should keep the idea but tweak it so the lines don't rhyme, as i personally think emotional poetry is better this way. i like how you say "it's been solong i can't remember the date" - my best friend ross and i are like that. keep working on it.
H-hey Nicola.. Welcome..
um may I ask why this is the same as 'Poem I wrote for my best mate' ? It was posted almost around the same time.... I wonder.. because it's confusing me