A Time of Change

by Nameless_And_Shamed
  • January 8, 2006
  • Poetry
  • Other

Winter breeze wraps 'round
Autumn trees as cold air sweeps
Up yesterdays leaves.

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Nameless_And_Shamed
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Nameless_And_Shamed commented · Sun Jan 08, 2006 6:01 pm

Oh, thanks.
I think I fixed it right.

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yoha_ahoy
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yoha_ahoy commented · Sun Jan 08, 2006 5:59 pm

Another good haiku. Good idea at least, but your first line is 6 syllables long.



[while trapped in a bucket of popcorn] You know what the worst part is? It's not even butter. We're gonna be destroyed by... ARTIFICIAL FLAVORING!
— Blake Bradley, Power Rangers Ninja Storm