This legit made me cry, which I would say is a good thing because you have to have feeling into your poem. What I like about this is that you actually make the reader cry which not many writing pieces make the reader actually feel something like that, but you're beautiful architect of a poem did. Great job on that.
I see why this is called a victim's perspective because this is very well toad as a victim perspective. You would mostly find the victim innocent which that's how the poem feels. Good job on that too.
So do I have any feedback or advice, not really much of feedback. Your poem was really well written and the punctuation was beautiful. My only advice is that you keep writing and never give up.
Signed, you're clumsy little friend.
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