Hey Momo!
RandomTalks here with a short review!
I really loved how you conveyed such an important and valuable lesson through such simple text. It was short and direct and you get straight to the point without lingering on descriptions or anything else really. I think it highlights the message of the analogy. You help others when they are in need, period. There are no 'buts', no 'ifs'. It is a simple fact, and you should stick to it lest you face the day when you are the one in need and the world simply walks by, ignoring any predicament you might find yourself in. Karma, I suppose finds a way to get back to you.
I am not used to reading such short pieces, but I don't think it would have the meaning if it was lengthened to fit more text that does not really go with the context. I am glad with your decision to keep it short. I love the slight satire you included with the thought "Surely my friend will help me!" It was not only ironical considering his actions of the previous night, but it also reflects the hypocrisy and the double standards of the world.
Overall, I really liked reading this. I guess it is true what they say, a friend in need's a friend indeed!
Keep up the good work and have a great day!
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