Based on: Symphony no. 9 – Dvorak.
By The Tree
A clouded sky over a green country.
Never again will there grow a tree.
A darkness over all the glee.
Never again the sounds of the merry.
How we hid in that shade
and the stories we made
under a sky so blue.
In the shadow we laid
and unknown prices we paid:
these stories would come true.
It has caught up with me:
The unforgiving fantasy.
How fires, ashes and dust grow
from my imaginative flow.
A revelation of relentless guilt
for the deathly chaos I built.
How I loved your face then.
Like you were already a woman
and I, a full-grown man.
I held your hands back when
we watched the sun rise in the morning
and later the moon would show its smile again.
How my smiles had such a high cost.
How your tears of joy would turn to dust.
Our stories so abruptly hushed,
for a love so young, so pure, it had no place for lust.
I still remember the last time.
to the top of the tree we climbed.
Where the adults would never find
The hidden treasure in our minds.
The stories of war we told.
Of our tongues the words rolled.
About heroes so bold
and villains so cold.
Creatures of the night.
Wizards in all their might.
Mounted on his horse the knight.
The black as well as the white.
Dragons, a fiery red.
Risen became the dead.
The enchanted forests,
no one dared to tread.
We told each other the tales
about the inns and their ales.
Whatever we deemed fit.
Unaware of the crime we would commit.
Then the first came to life.
It was the dwarf and his wife.
After that it happened fast.
The knights, wizards creatures of the night-
and the dragon came last.
A path of destruction the dragon left behind,
When down the tree we climbed
And burning houses was all we would find.
The creatures and heroes of good
ran, hopped,
jumped and galloped
after the creatures and minions of the bad.
But into the vile traps they were led.
Where their goodness was all they had.
It was that moment when I lost her.
Her memory is now a flower border
around my gravel and silt fantasy.
It has indeed caught up with me.
As dark clouds form fast,
from the way the dragon flies,
that left its trail of ash,
I catch a glimpse of the blue skies.
Even though it happens really fast
The blue of the sky makes me realize
Nothing is meant to last.
Not even
a clouded sky over a green country
Sometime again will there grow another tree.
Not even
a darkness over all the glee.
Sometime again there will sound the sounds of people so merry.
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