Ahh sorry that was me misreading it.
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We gorge ourselves
thus we grow fat
and drink therefore
our livers rot,
unconsoled we hurtle on
towards the fate our fathers knew
slow suicides to save their sons
I would change it to "liver's" but seeing as how it is neither, the abbreviated or the "rot" that belongs to the liver i dont feel that it is necessary. But i think i may take you up on the full stop.
our livers rot,
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