Hello.
Well, alright. In essence this is a predictable metaphor; and not one I would have expected you to use However, having said that, reading these earlier works of yours I am noticing a different pattern. Very different indeed.
I mean, well hell, you've even used PUNCTUATION in this work. (Were you feeling ok?) XD
I think you also use very even stanzas in some of these earlier ones. This was clearly a phase, because there isn't much of it in your recent works.
It's interesting to read you backwards, because I notice all the little stylistic features that have changed and which ones (if any) that have remained the same.
These works really break the mould of your writing and I can see a different side to you, your character and the whole tone of your writing voice/style.
Stuck to you.
Always by your side.
Talk to me.
I've nothing to hide.
I have faith.
In you, and your word.
You have me.
That can't be absurd.
Together.
Always, just like glue.
Forever.
I commit to you.
Please promise.
Promise to agree.
I need you.
And you so need me.
To summarise the first stanza in a word you could say honesty. Then the next one is about commitment. I guess this work is a series of promises made from one person to another when they are in love, conveyed by using flowery imagery and romantic language. But it works!
Underneath.
Underneath the light.
Conjoined twins.
A future so bright.
Your soft voice.
A marriage of eyes.
If I died,
you'd do more than cry.
Hear my voice.
Repeat my motives.
Understand.
It's seems we're floating.
Intertwined.
Deep into your kiss.
Oh, your word.
Something I can't miss.
The physical attraction and the unity between two people as well as marriage, I really love the language in that stanza. Just beautiful. Beautiful, beautiful.
D'awwww. I commit.
I do sacrifice.
You commit.
You brighten the night.
Tomorrow.
Tomorrow is clear.
Good heavens.
Looks like it from here.
Have your say.
And I will have mine.
All I want.
It's you, all the time.
These two are about submitting yourself to the other person and keeping in mind the things you should to keep a relationship going. As well as, only wanting the other person and allowing their thoughts to be heard and sharing ideas and all of that romantic shizzle.
Actually, thinking about this in another way, this reminds me of the Velvet Underground song: I'm Sticking With You, I'm Made of Glue.
Nice job hunny, it makes a change to read something different. You should try doing stuff like this more often.
I love you. ♥
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