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Letter To This Unknown Lover

by MasterGrieves


I haven't seen your face.
Yet I am keen on starting it.
I'd love to take you out.
I'd love to see you now.

You are right.
You are right.
You are right as can be.

If I was to tell you now,
would you put it against me?
A letter to this unknown lover.

You are right.
You are right.
You are right as can be.

Moving away.
Until I cannot see.

But people they point the finger.
And they will say bad things, I know.
Break through the ice? No we
shouldn't tell them what we are breaking at all.

You are right.
You are right.
You are right as can be.
You are right.
You are right.
You are right as can be.


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Fri Feb 24, 2012 9:01 pm
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youngwolf1105 says...



Again, so many of your romantic lyrics are so easy to put music to. I love all of them!!!




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Fri Feb 17, 2012 8:49 am
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Nargles says...



this is nice, I really like it! Write more please!!




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Fri Feb 17, 2012 1:56 am
demib says...



I love this poem, but i kind of wonder, Who were you thinking of when you made this poem?




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Thu Feb 16, 2012 10:19 pm
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:) I like it, it's nice.




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Thu Feb 16, 2012 9:10 pm
GeeLyria says...



Caaaaaaaaaaaaaatchy.

Lovely!!

Great job, Twin!





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