Hi!....welcome to YWS...I think you wont get critique under this section...try in fiction or something like that...
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He grabs Fiona by the hand and quickly they hide in the room of the second floor. Cronoe was still shocked of what had happened minutes before. "Why on earth are you trying to negotiate with The Winship? Like they're willing to!", Crone cried. Fiona stared at him, direct into Cronoe's blue eyes. He's just a kid, she thought-and do not understand these certain procedures. He didn't know that The Winship was the group that brought him to this world.
Hi!....welcome to YWS...I think you wont get critique under this section...try in fiction or something like that...
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