Not to bad. The first poem and the third poem are the better ones. The second poem doesn't flow too well as ending a line with and or an incomplete phrase isn't that good. The haiku is a bit rough as the first line has only 4 syllables instead of 5 and the lines aren't related that well, so it fails to make sense.
The poem about the child is pretty good, it flows pretty well: no problems there.
The second one is really good. The imagery works well.
Overall, not too bad.
I like! I found the first poem amusing. I really couldn't criticize anything. Thumbs up on this one.
These are good. I really liked the first one. There were a hell of a lot of similes. The message is really relatable, too, trying to figure out the standards for what makes a life a success. The second one, I also liked a lot because it sort of describes the way the world never really sleeps, no matter what's happening in your life. Good work, and keep it up. I hope that my review helps.
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