Hello!
RandomTalks here with a short review!
I enjoyed reading this poem! Its simple and realistic and I love the way you have presented us with a thought by simply framing it into a poem. I am not very experienced at reviewing poetry and I see that you have already received many wonderful reviews, so I apologize if this comes across as a little repetitive and unhelpful!
All dishwasher's know
Of the dishwasher's bane.
This was an effective start to the poem as it brings the reader into the heart of the poem from the very first moment instead of beating around the bush. I liked the narrative style of the poem that is evident from the very first line. It made it an all the more enjoyable experience for me.
The bane of a dishwasher,
A dishwasher's bane-
These lines did sound a little repetitive to me. You are simply repeating the thought of the first line by rearranging the words in the second line. Until that moment, I was fully immersed in the poem and just moving along with the ride, but this part kind of startled me out of it. It does add to the narrative style of the poem, but at the same time, it feels kind of unnecessary and a waste of a line.
Overall, this was a truly lovely poem. I loved the fact that you did not just go on about the dishwasher's bane, but actually explained why it is a bane with examples that are witty and humorous at the same time. I enjoyed the rhythm of the poem - the words flowed very naturally and even though at times it felt as if you were exaggerating a little about the dishwasher's bane, it made for an even more entertaining read because of the narrative style of your poem!
Thank you for sharing this with us!
Keep writing and have a great day!
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