Published March 21, 2007
“Dragons, fantasy or reality? That’s the question cryptozoologists have been trying to prove, but only met dead ends by reality. Can there be a creature who is not an insect but have six external limbs or that can breathe fire.
“If dragons are real why hasn’t one been spotted or a skeleton been found? Well, my friends the search is over, I have found undeniable proof of their existence and where they live. Finally the search for dragons is over...”
My first Sci-fi book, so I hope it's good. If you think it belongs in a different genre please tell.
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Great introduction. Most dragon books are fantasy, so this one should be really interesting. I can't wait to read more! 10/10, definately
It's a good why of introduceing. Though you could just have this being the opening of the first chapter. It's a great way to draw in the readers.
I think it's a good spot. It's not fantasy it's definantly science fiction.
Quote: [“Dragons, fantasy or reality? That’s the question cryptozoologists have been trying to prove, but only met dead ends by reality. Can there be a creature who is not an insect but have six external limbs or that can breathe fire.
“If dragons are real why hasn’t one been spotted or a skeleton been found? Well, my friends the search is over, I have found undeniable proof of their existence and where they live. Finally the search for dragons is over...” ]
Great way of introducing your story, continue and make the extended to become your prologue.