The Path of Life

Layla wrote:
The path of life
Its sometimes easy,
Usually hard.

You have two choices here:
1. Change its to it's (BTW, if you wanted to say that the path-IT is, then it's spelled IT'S)
2. Put the punctuation in the first verse (and in every other verse in the poem:evil: )
The third verse needs "but" in the start.

Layla wrote:But everyone follows it,
One way or another,
Whether they like it or not.

Layla wrote:Life is fun, full of happiness,
But here"s the thing;
We Die.

Those inverted commas should be just one apostrophe.
Die-I know what you're trying to say, but it's okay to let DIE as die.



Overall:
This is your first piece posted (maybe ) so I wont be too harsh. This is really nothing special, but also nothing bad. It's simple, without complicating, straight in the middle, kind of cute, kind of sad, but sweet. You need to put the punctuation always. The captions are also important, don't listen what you hear about not putting the punctuation or proper caps. "It's poetic" they say, but poet is a servant of words(irony it's that we shape the words and use them), that all became from the statement that we are the greatest specie on this planet, but the nature is much stronger than us. Don't forget that.

Oh, I'm nuts.
Bye.