You might pass it as a prose-poem. Or just put line breaks in.
The piece itself is very abstract, though. A load of abstract imagery won't do much for your reader...you need something concrete, something you can visualize in your head. If you want to discuss something abstract like "dreams", you first need to put it in terms that are easier to talk about, easier to describe.
In the meantime, read some poetry. (You might like Walt Whitman. *shameless plug for one of my favorite poets*)
-Colleen
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