I LOVE this! It's so short, cute, funny, jokey, amusing! (Wow, so many adjectives). It's really good, I especially like the second line : I wandered through fields of whipped cream". Yum and also the last line. You seem to have a unique sense of humour, from what I can see form your works. And yet you can be serious too, if you want.
Keep it up!
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