Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
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'I reached for that peaceful warm spot in my stomach and let it spread like hot liquid steel through out my body. First, it traveled up to my heart and through my arms, reaching my fingertips with a pop. My jaw relaxed in expectation and it felt as if the bones melted to shift into my true self. My mind felt like it filled with the carbonate of the sweetest kind of wine and I tasted something undescribeble on my tongue. Then it shot down straight to my toes and a big beautiful beast tore out of my chest and my skin dissolved; revealing broad muscled shoulders, an elegant wolf-like face, and a thick fur coat in its place. I fell forward on all fours and let out a low snort of relief at the freedom I felt when I was like this. We generally looked like wolves. The exceptions being that our ears were wider and longer, and our back legs were longer, giving us more speed.'
OKayy...well this is certainly a rather intriguing little excerpt that you've got right here. I don't believe I've run into anything quite of this nature before despite a plethora of werewolf related stories that I've seen on YWS. It does look like you've chosen a slightly more unique path of getting to this particular topic here and on first glance it seems quite good.
This particular piece here is a teensy bit confusing though. It seems you're just sort of describing what I assume is sort of transition process here from human to werewolf rather than capturing anything storywise, so as I suppose a bit of a proof of concept or something like that, this could work, although as an intro I'd say a bit more of the plot is required here.
As a piece, it is still quite an enjoyable one and I certainly do find myself wanting to know more and more on how this world works, but I think a little more would go some way to helping out here with this particular introduction that you've got going on.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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