I wrote this back in 2000 or 1999. It was my senior year of high school.
The style of the poem is a sestina. The rules are as follows:
1 2 3 4 5 6 - End words of lines in first sestet.
6 1 5 2 4 3 - End words of lines in second sestet.
3 6 4 1 2 5 - End words of lines in third sestet.
5 3 2 6 1 4 - End words of lines in fourth sestet.
4 5 1 3 6 2 - End words of lines in fifth sestet.
2 4 6 5 3 1 - End words of lines in sixth sestet.
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Canary word: Present
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We touched it in Creative writing, but never really examined the mechanics behind it. It sounds very good. I'm still not fully grasped as to what the meaning was, but i didn notice that the arroow went by the doves and the doves went by the maidens. So i figured it was showing the connection og things. Or something of that nature.
It was very nice, Not hard difficult to read. I dont know much about this type of poem so i wouldn't take my critique too seriously.
Ooh. I've not heard of this kind of poem before, which makes it difficult to critique, since I don't have past experience with them to compare it to. I will say though that it seems like a difficult style to write in, as it sounds quite repetitive, but that is kind of unavoidable, I suppose. Apart from that, I think there is some good description here, and I could visualise the scene well. Good job.