Hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review your work.
you have painted a very serene of the landscape. your emphasis on nature was very peaceful and transparent. it was like watching a Hayao Miyazaki movie. my favorite one that reminded me of this was Princess Mononoke and the Wind Rises. the emotional tone and symbolisms within was very imaginative and very joyful to read.
"God is with you throughout the years."
this part was a brilliant way to end the poem. it emphasized the use of faith within the story as it is used as a coping mechanism that every parent uses when a catastrophe like an earthquake or a hurricane sweeps the land.
i really love this poem. keep writing and i'll wait for your next story.
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