Sweet poem. I think it was pretty good. But it had some of it's flaws. Like the stars should of been stars'... But I just see that someone already said that...
Overall still an cool poem. The first part gives out a warm,calm pink colour to me.
Then the second gives out a salty ocean breeze. I can hear the ocean even though it might not be about it. It gives a soft green colour of calm.
And the last part, gives a mysterious silver colour, and fog.
Kool poem. =)
Points: 890
Reviews: 3
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