Yeah, like anyone would reply, 'Yeah, sure, Madam. I'd love a feisty punch to my face'.
I don't know what to comment, as I'm not sure if this writing style is some form of poetry. If it is, please tell me. :p
Anyway, nice, but I still think you should've considered the fact that no one would reply "Yes".
I mean, probably you did consider it, but then you should've written the next line according to it. Just saying.
Keep it up!
Mysticalxx
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