Hey! Forever here with a review!! This is meant for #reVIEWS . Let's see if I have managed to learn anything at all.
So it was quite interesting. Seems like the aliens havw complete revamped the Earth excluding the camp area. Perhaps they have changed into some other planet, maybe their home planet. Now this home planet. It's better to include the name if the home planet. As you told I am not very wrong the history stuffs, the humans were the one to take them to Earth or at least set up a communication with them. So they should know the planet they lived in. Also, judging from the character of the Aliens, they seem to be supercilious. So, I expect them to brag about their home planet.
Now the footage. I thought they used an old device to take all the videos recently but it seems like the videos were taken long ago. So, there will be many changes now. That is quite a disadvantage on the sides of the human beings as they don't know the present condition of the outside. However, I wonder why they didn't manage to take any footage recently. Has the security increased a lot? Maybe it has.
The trees seem to be interesting things. Although Aria reached the conclusion very fast that they are unmistakably trees, it's still a mystery to the readers if they are actually trees. Maybe they are for further securities. I don't know but for some reason, I just had a thought of insectivorous trees. Maybe these things which appear to be trees are actually there to trap the humans if they get outside. Also the light. This light is very uncomfortable for the eyes of the humans right? But it seems they are not for the Aliens. So, maybe the Aliens have different sights. I mean they see the world differently. That's not unnatural tho.
The optimistic nature of Harry was confirmed in this chapter along with the optimistic nature of Aria. Explicitly, Harry is more optimistic but we are yet to discover what we have.
It seemed like only she ans Harry were present in the room. However, there were many more characters. Just include a few lines about them. You don't want to make the readers imagine the wrong thing. Just some of their reactions and movements here and there will do.
Overall, quite a great part. I will get to the next soon. Anyway, I hope I have learnt at least a single thing from the Reviews hashtag and could apply it in the review.
Keep Writing!!
~Forever
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