Woot woot, last part of chapter 3! C: I’m intensely curious about the mission now, but I suppose some character interactions are fun too…
Sally whirled around, already nodding so fast she probably resembled a bobble head in that moment.
XD Your similes are on point. They add nice bits of humor to the novel!
”Why would I not be, okay?” Sally asked, trying to sound like she absolutely didn’t know the answer to that question.
Something seems rather off with Sally. I can’t think of anything that could’ve unsettled her like this, though?
“Because the Sally I know can come up with better excuses than that for staring off into space for no real reason.”
Wait... Maybe that slip into first person from the previous chapter… and Anna mentioning the Sally she knows... *gasp* Has Sally been taken over by a different being?? That would explain the mood swings here... Or is that too far-fetched— does she just feel really flustered around Anna? Or maybe it's the LMS time crunch. >.> If it is because of LMS, I feel like mentioning some of Sally's thoughts or making it a bit clearer as to why exactly she's so unbalanced here would be great! ^^
“No, unfortunately I’m going to have to do this briefing here, so I can’t actually be hushed.”
Ooh, that’s a good comeback, Anna. I’m not completely clear why Anna’s so good at flustering Sally (is it her sheer size? or does Sally have a crush on Anna?) but her ability is quite impressive. =P
Safi predictably spluttered. “I. I didn’t mean it like that. Its. Umm field work. Excitement. Detective. Training.”
XD Safi… Adorable.
Safi was nodding along, taking her turn as the room’s resident bobblehead while Serafina gave her two more pats on the shoulder before returning to her stiffer normal stance.
Haha, I love the callback to the bobblehead joke! And it's quite interesting to see Safi and Sera's relationship from the perspective of an outsider. That smile and that twitch... :eyes:
Sorry if this review was a bit disjointed; I’m on mobile right now. But thanks for the great chapter and have a marvelous day/night! =D
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