The influence of having a breakfast impacting to the study abilities
For this research, I stated my hypothesis which is ‘ Does having breakfast before
going to school helps students to concentrate better for their studying abilities?’. The
reason why I thought and chose this hypothesis was because some of my friends are
not having breakfast and they always told me that it is hard to focus during the class
and tests. Many students are not having breakfast because of many reasons. According
to the American Academy of Pediatrics it said that “ Many older teens are busy until late
into the night with homework, extracurricular activities and part-time jobs. They go to
bed late, then get up and rush off to school, leaving no time to eat” (Breakfast for
Learning: Why the Morning Meal Matters, 2023). So I was wondering if there is any
correlation between the breakfast that helps to concentrate much better. Moreover,
when I was in elementary school, I learned that breakfast helps to focus better than the
people who usually do not have a breakfast, so I was really interested in this topic for a
very long time ago. Therefore, through this research, I want to solve my interests about
the relationship between breakfast and studying abilities. For this test on this question
or hypothesis, I want to experiment with this research with four students and compare
their results. And set the independent variable which will be two students who are
always having breakfast before going to school. And the other students will be students
who are not having breakfast before going to school. And for this experiment, I want to
set a control variable in which there is no change that both students will be the same
age, GPA and same grade in certain classes. And then, I gave them the same
worksheet to memorize for three days. After the three days, the two students will have
to take the same tests that are about the worksheet that they have to memorize. And
finally compare their grades between four students to my correlation between breakfast
and studying abilities. My prediction for this research is that it will be a positive
correlation that having breakfast will help for the concentration which is one of the
studying abilities so that they will get higher test scores than the others who don't have
a breakfast before going to school.
After the experiment of my hypothesis, I got two students who had breakfast
everyday and got scores of 98% and 96% on each quiz and got 92% and 89% of the
students who did not have breakfast. According to the data, I found that the two
students who had breakfast everyday got higher scores than the others who did not
have breakfast. This data shows a positive correlation between having a breakfast
affecting studying abilities such as memorization and concentration. Moreover, the
American Academy of Pediatrics also mentioned that “Studies show that eating
breakfast positively affects school performance. They have better concentration and
more energy” (Breakfast for Learning: Why the Morning Meal Matters, 2023). They also
stated that eating breakfast in the morning before a test has significantly higher scores
and it helps to reduce making mistakes such as spelling errors or marking mistakes
during the tests.
Therefore, having breakfast before going to school helps for their studying ability
which shows the positive correlation. According to the data, it also affected the GPA by
the test which resulted in students who had everyday breakfast got higher scores than
the students who did not. As a result, this data shows that it helps students to
concentrate and memorize better quickly and easily than those who do not have
breakfast before they go to school. However, not only all students are employed to this
research since each of every student has different studying abilities whether they are
having a breakfast or not. But I am recommending that students have breakfast for
better concentration and for their health.
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Hello! Hop here with a review! From what it looks like, I believe this acc isn't going to be one that is actually going to be on yws. But anyways, please give me some grace when it comes to reviewing. I am not the best at it but that is okay. Anyways, I hole you like my review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I recommend giving it a more alluring hook. Something that really pulls the reader in. Something that makes them want to continue reading.
I do think you did a good job citing where you got your information from.
Now, lets talk about your hypothesis, your experiment,and the results. You made a good theory and stated what you think might happen pretty well. But, how you set up your experiment is what I was a little sketchy on. I feel like you would have to do a little more than just you mentioned. Also, what was the control? Was there a control? How can we prove that it was because they didn't eat? How many hours did one spend studying the thing you gave them than the other?
It all comes down to these tiny little details that make it so important. I am not saying your theory is wrong, but I am saying that I need more evidence to believe your hypothesis.
Love,
Hop
Health impacts your daily life all the time. Hi, it’s me, CATS, here to review this wonderful passage! Let’s go!
First of all, I think it is very creative to do this, and I also absolutely love the facts you stated in there! Very well done!
The only tiny little thing that I would suggest is that it was a bit hard to read because the sentences stopped in the middle and I had to read the next paragraph and my weird brain just put a period at the end of each paragraph so...
But that is the only thing I would change! I think everything else is great and awesome, and I can’t wait to see more of your works, my friend! I found this interesting. Use your potiental to the full power! Happy Writing!!!
Sincerely,
CATS