Natalie 3

by Jherek

Published January 7, 2011

Taken down, have some Lovecraft instead :D

In the tunnels of that twisted wood, whose low prodigious oaks twine groping

boughs and shine dim with the phosphorescence of strange fungi, dwell the

furtive and secretive Zoogs; who know many obscure secrets of the dream world

and a few of the waking world, since the wood at two places touches the lands of

men, though it would be disastrous to say where. Certain unexplained rumours,

events, and vanishments occur among men where the Zoogs have access, and it is

well that they cannot travel far outside the world of dreams. But over the

nearer parts of the dream world they pass freely, flitting small and brown and

unseen and bearing back piquant tales to beguile the hours around their hearths

in the forest they love. Most of them live in burrows, but some inhabit the

trunks of the great trees; and although they live mostly on fungi it is muttered

that they have also a slight taste for meat, either physical or spiritual, for

certainly many dreamers have entered that wood who have not come out. Carter,

however, had no fear; for he was an old dreamer and had learnt their fluttering

language and made many a treaty with them; having found through their help the

splendid city of Celephais in Ooth-Nargai beyond the Tanarian Hills, where

reigns half the year the great King Kuranes, a man he had known by another name

in life. Kuranes was the one soul who had been to the star-gulls and returned

free from madness.

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Jherek commented Comment · Jan 8, 2011

Hey WillowD, thanx for the nice words. Natalie’s a young adult actually, out of uni, supposed to be currently working political PR HQ, only she’s having a major breakdown, that’s why Dad’s regressed to behaving like she’s ten, and so has she :)

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WillowD wrote a review Review · Jan 7, 2011

Very nice! I actually really like this. Are Natalie's "figures" real or just dreams? Hmmm.....'tis suspenseful.

I don't have a lot to say for this. Everything is written beautifully yet I do have to admit, make sure there's not too much flowery prose because sometimes it can get bogged down in the action.

How old is Natalie supposed to be? I got confused during the end because Anton started using such big words like "dream paralysis". Does she understand what this means? Or is Anton's character the type of father who doesn't realize his daughter has a smaller vocabulary? Ha.

That's pretty much it. I hope I get to see the next part in this!



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