thank you so much for all of your feedback
this poem was written in about 3 minutes right before rushing off to class, with little editing, so it's bound to be pretty bad poetry, although at the time i wrote it
i loved it. lol well for starters when i say all my poetry like neon light addicting, i don't mean to the reader, i mean to myself. yes, this poem lacks structure and rythm, but it's supposed to be about a person lacking structure and rythm. hmm i guess you have to have a poem that's structured and rythmetical to portray that, interestingly enough. well i have a looot of work to do.
as everyone who's anyone knows: learn the rules before you break them. in poetry, i have got a lottt of rules to learn. if you have any suggestions or comments, or *wink wink* rules, please PM me or comment on this poem
thanks a bunch, love to you all =)
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