Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
You cannot capture a feeling. Pictures will show an event, a memory, but it cannot capture a feeling. Words, although they can describe anything, they cannot capture a feeling.
A feeling is like a night sky, you know what is there but there is always something you cannot see or don’t expect. A passing comet, a new star.
Feelings are unpredictable, you can be feeling happy then sad, you feel love then hatred, then you feel something you have never felt before and you don’t know what it is but you know you will never be the same after that moment.
We are but simple people who follow our simple paths but we harbour something much greater than ourselves and that is what makes us so great. We feel.
Okay...this is a very interesting piece here. I don't believe I've seen something quite this short before that managed to address what appears to be a full proper topic here from start to finish. It seems to also be oddly fitting that something of this size should be talking about something that can be as fleeting as a feeling here.
Okay...so moving onto the actual sort of situation you've described here. I like the message its trying to convey here. I don't know quite how much I actually agree with it, but I certainly do find myself enjoying it quite a bit. I think you've done a great job of conveying that point too using this extra touch of imagery and really leaning into the feeling that you're trying to create here.
I think the way you tap into these feelings then tying into people there is very nicely done. Its such a simple statement there with no real frills attached but its still quite powerful and it certainly makes you think quite a bit. I think you've done a wonderful job with this piece right here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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