Published April 16, 2010
Ape man, you are the past
You braved every winter
Built only to last.
Ape man, you built the earth
You saw it from infancy
Witnessed its birth.
Ape man, you gazed at the skies
Somewhere within them
You dreamt of a prize.
Ape man, we’re still just the same
We search for the answers
To give them a name.
Ape man, you are the link
You gave us the world
You taught us to think.
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I don't really know how to get rid of the repetition in this one, it's kinda the point =p lol but thanks for the reviews
Again, it's good except for the repetition like in your other poem. =p