There's so much emotion in this! I want more! I really like the premise of it being all about the things you can't achieve and your failures. This poem is definitely not one of the two! I don't have any suggestions since I already love this poem so much. I love the creative choice of not capitalizing the start of the lines. I love how you separated the stanzas. The whole poem is pleasing to look at and really nice to read!
You're doing amazing! Keep it up; I'd really love to read more from you!!
Have a wonderful day/night!
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