Legacy here for a review.
I like how you compared death to a soul catcher and did not paint him as a negative or a positive entity. But I did not like how you kept it so short. I would like to see this expanded and explained more of how death does what they do and if they like doing it etc.
I agree with cytochrome when they say that you don't need the italics when they are already stand alone lines.
Overall, I would recommend some slight editing and expansion before this is a final draft. Legacy.
Points: 402
Reviews: 145
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