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Last crit no longer applies, apparently. Looks like you've got a solid grip on Thomas here. This scene didn't have the rushed feeling of the last one at all. Interesting exchange between Thomas and Price. What exactly did he do? He the cause of all this? *curious*
And now I've got new set of questions again. Prolly more than half are irrelevant or are going very far off track, but oh well. You were right in the PM. looks like you dipped into the flow a bit easier with Thomas this time. So, next one should be Judah and Adam, then, yes? I'll get to them as soon as I'm done with my teaching questions.
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I swearz. I'll set Hal to remind me. Honest. Though I don't think I'll forget with Price questions buzzing around in my head. In case I do, though, I'll set Hal.
If I don't get to it by this time tomorrow, beat me over the head with a stick.